Day 56

8/18/2006

Review of Snakes on a Plane (SOAP)

Soap sneakes up coiled and springs
With genre this and genre that.
From buddy salt-n-peppa to
Ironic delivery done in emancipated chivalry.

Clichés become chinks to tighten
The Wall of Story Two.

The small defensive circle
"Watch ma back."
If First Class shuffles special be it Alamo champagne.

"What bitest now with vigor?
Not a claim to idle wistfulness
Or pale implore.
One grasps the scent, now fade,
Of thoughts impure."

Are things so tight with Eve's apple dealer?
One seen a stealer with slithered unrelent.

Wary side of focus-group polyethylenic gloss
That shapes a wall for
Far-flung thrill Fang-Toss.

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